Houshou Marine [re-do] | Hololive

https://www.artstation.com/artwork/r9645a
A re-drawing? draw over? inking? how do I describe this?
The previously complete version linked is now what my 'sketches' look like by default it's quite amusing lol.
Actually, the current sketches are also inked, so... maybe incomparable.

On a negative not: I think... the super thin lines are not doing it for me.